Beautiful Beate, especially those last lines. The build up of tension was perfect, with its underlying foreboding kept in check…
Far too heavy for my taste! I've never really liked her look that much... reminds me a little bit of…
This is so powerful! Each stanza brings new new insights and perspectives. Beautifully written, Jodie!
Fantastic! P
11/10
Mind-blowing piece! So beautifully constructed, line by line.
Amazing!! Love love love
I returned to read your writings once again. It's so ironic how our paths were and are so similar. It's…
Nice. I identified and it was sweet to read. Thank you.
Love this!